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Flashback Fridays Oh, how you wander
through the mists of
my mind; nothing
touches you but
moonbeams,
gentles
breezes,
or soft
kisses
in the
rain.
Oh, how you wander
through the mists of
my mind; nothing
touches you but
moonbeams,
gentles
breezes,
or soft
kisses
in the
rain.
Short & Sweet
Ethereal and transcendental in one, a pleasant poem about lovers and beloveds - allets
Thanks!
Thanks!
Just Reread
So delicate and light and lean. Love is like that - Lady A
24 Years
A real, little gem of a poem. Loved it!
Smile.. it is the cheapest facelift.
Thank you!
Thank you!
i like this poem it's sweet
i like this poem
it's sweet and short and to the point, yet elegant and wordy enough to not just be a statement
:) thanks for the share
Much Love
Ashley
My pleasure and thanks for
My pleasure and thanks for the feedback!
May I have permission to
May I have permission to include this in a 'favorite poems' thread I have?
It's a perfect jewel
Sure, I'm pleased you enjoyed
Sure, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Lovely!
Short and sweet! I'm curious, the poem is sort of shaped like a right-angled triangle. Is there any significance to this? :-) Is it a picture poem?
Check out my poetry book - as I write it! http://lostincyberspacepoems.blogspot.com
Trying to mimic the memory -
Trying to mimic the memory - dwindling constantly.
Brilliant!
Wow. Great idea :-)
Check out my poetry book - as I write it! http://lostincyberspacepoems.blogspot.com
Yeah even before reading all
Yeah even before reading all of it, my eyes followed the structure towards the bottom, where it quietly fizzled away :) I then reread the actual words. So your words really kinda speak twice. One of my favorites so far.
Cheers,
Adam_San
Thanks!
Thanks!