The River of Your Hair

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Perverse & Bazaar
Sun-ripened like the tender skin of a 
sweet pear,
flowing infinitely downward
past and onward still;
a nape of neck, but ever downward,
Her almond tresses spill.
Bare shoulder brushing 
aside the tickle
but still a trickle downward,
ever onward,
never still.
Between her breasts 
where hill meets dale,
most beautiful curtain
creates immaculate veil.  
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Mmmakaveli's picture

Truly Lovely.

I knew from the title that this one would be beautiful.

Bellalibra's picture

serenity of sensuality

addicted to this   On repeat 

Bellalibra's picture

Sigh....

Sigh....

Bellalibra's picture

Sigh....

Sigh....

Beatnik1979's picture

Thanks for the read 

Thanks for the read 

Starward's picture

All the other comments say so

All the other comments say so much that I can only agree with them, I cannot add anything as I stand in the presence of this magnificent poem.


Starward

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Beatnik1979's picture

I thank you for the value of

I thank you for the value of your insight 

not_an_addict's picture

beautiful!

agree with all my fellow commenters. hopefully one day a man will think of me this way ;) 


please read my poems, and enjoy the real-life drama that is my life!

Destinee1398's picture

Beautiful.

Beautiful.


-Destinee

hopelessly-candid's picture

This is one of the most

This is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read...it must have been inspired by someone kinda special....with great hair x)

cathycavalcante's picture

Sweet and sensual. Nicely

Sweet and sensual. Nicely crafted, William. Flows gentle....like long, silky hair... :D


 

Stardust's picture

poetically sensual... or

poetically sensual... or sensually poetic?? anyway, u get the idea, right??

nicely crafted poem :) liked it

allets's picture

Hair

A musical, now a poem :D. Very ticklish and tantalizinly visual. I love extended images that bite! A Georgia On My Mind read - Just Bein' Stella

 

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