Subliminal Message

Poems are the path to inner peace.

Are the mind and soul aligned?
The test to re-write  my own
path through past in future.
To tempt ones own fate with 
inner radiance beaconing 
peace and light.
Walk with me hand in hand
down through all 
my fears and dreams by 
path made way by time.
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ScarlettLetter's picture

May I walk with you, hand in

May I walk with you, hand in hand? 


AngryLaughter's picture

Do you need

A mind-body mechanic, or chiropractor?

schmuckjones's picture

True that Sir

It always good to write it out, sing it out, paint it out, just let it out.  So you can let it in.  I like this one, but then again I like all of them.

Beatnik1979's picture

hidden wordplay in there....

its my twist on  device, like writing a rubix cube or picture puzzle.

allets's picture

Love A Great Time Allusion

Like shedding snake skin and forgetting the negativity of the past to make way for light and dreams again. Ultimate optimism here - a good place to take a walk :D - Lady A -




Beatnik1979's picture


thank you allets...your insights are always very much appreciated!

 Sometimes, I like to try to hide things within the lines or in the structures of the lines.

Im not quite sure it is even a legitimate device, but its there none the less ;)