mother-in-law

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Tales had roared

The compound word

'Mother-in-law'

With killing aesthetic

 

After years of striving

As a woman of authority

You're confronted by

A mother from another

 

'A mother' you would say

For your breastsucking son

Least you forget, she is

Enthroned all queenly

 

Fight her not for this

You're his first

Gratified is she

His humble aeonian

 

Winds of her youth passed

She beckon her rival

She knows not a mother better

Grown like you she crawled

 

Mother's breeding apart

Patience for the first

Tolerance for the continual

Together he is fed

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is my first poem, what do think of it? 

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very nice

I am very impressed keep up the good work. You can do it!

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot