This is not a love poem B

This is not a love poem
I swear this is not a love poem
if it is , i would have written about YOU and ME
and about how much i love you
And how much you meant to me
instead, i'm gonna write
about how things happened unplanned,
about how they end
and how we fall apart
and how the ending starts
This is my first poem,
so i will try to make it rhyme
or else i'm just gonna waste my time

This is not a love poem, i swear !
But if it is
I would have written about YOU and ME ,
and about how i wish we were meant to be
instead, i 'm gonna write
about how a good friendship
Glittering like a spaceship
Turned into a sinking ship
and now i'm just a blacksheep
And all those gossips
About us was just a bullshit

This is not a love poem, B !
But if it is
I would have written about YOU and ME ,
and about how those butterflies flying in my tummy
Instead, i'm gonna write about
how stupid I am to tell you how i feel
When you left me i was so ill
The hurt so bad, the pain so real
They say platonic relationship seldom works
It's true baby and now i went beserk

This is not a love poem, B
so i'm not gonna write abot YOU and ME
instead, i'm gonna write about you and her
of how deeply she loves you and you love her
and i want to be in your story because
I still have you here in my heart so dear
and I love everyone that loves you including her
and everyone that you love,
I was so out of love
while you were so greatly loved
so I guess
You should write a love poem instead,
and make it rhyme
So you won't waste your time.

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nightlight1220's picture

I really enjoyed this. When I

I really enjoyed this. When I clicked on it I thought it was going to be a long redundant rant, and it turned out to be really fun and interesting to read. Thanks for sharing!!

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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Glad that you like it. Tq

Glad that you like it. Tq


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a.griffiths57's picture

This is not a love poem B:

 

 

What a lovely declaration of love throughout your poem, even if it fell on deaf ears. The feelings and forlonging is all there. Great poem and a good read.


 

 

http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57