Numbered times

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2004

A million times sorry

A thousand times glad

One hundred should have beens

Nine times I've been mad

Three times you have broke my heart

One time that it died

To many times we've had this fight

The first time that I've cried

Five times that I've missed my chance

One that you miss yours

And so the story goes with us

That when it rains it pours

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Shaun Hirdes's picture

great poem...dont think ending fits..but overall fantastic.

Nicole.J.Burgess's picture

good grief woman!!!!!!!!!
i like it, but you put my shit to shame


Nicole.J.Burgesss

bb's picture

acturite

roadgrog's picture

you know ash sometimes reading your stuff is like dancing a walts. its spins you around and around, but you never become dizzy. the number idea was fun. I love the lines
"A million times sorry
A thousand times glad"

Ahh emotions are never just right unless they pour out like a dam that has met its last crack.

And from the looks of things you might need an umbrella