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Don't let go
Cling to your memory
Of my words filling your body like concrete
And the truth opening your mind like church
Don't give in
Be true to yourself
And all the feelings you've ever felt
All the things you heard me say
Don't let these days go by
Without my love
Sitting in the back of your mind
Curled like a child in your heart

 

 

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ok sadly nicole it took me till now august 15 2008 at 5:50 am to finaly chnage cncert to concrete, and I almost did it wrong again :P

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©6 February 2004 - 9:52am — running_with_rabbits
23 January 2006 - 7:07pm — running_with_rabbits
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lol so I did
now see if you read these right after they were posted, there would be no imbarsement on my part

Much Love

Ashley

22 January 2006 - 9:27pm — Nicole.J.Burgess
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Other then the fact that you said concert and I think you meant concrete, it is pretty damn good

Nicole.J.Burgesss

10 February 2004 - 8:12pm — Bardock aka (David) Fastow aka (Kohut) (not verified)
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Yea this poem is great it really inspires me to tell you I feel about you.

Yours Truly: David Kohut