Lovestruck

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You struck me like lightning.

You rend my life in two

Into before and after

I met you.

 

You warm me by candle light.

You fill me with the slow

radiating glow

of embers.

 

As if I stumbled in the night

Into a large orange grove

Full of blooms

My favorite scent.

 

And here I am

At night

Deep in a forest of orange blossoms

Lit by flickering light

In the perfect place and time

Caressed by Fate and the luck

Of your lightning strike.

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SSmoothie's picture

Hazzah! Boom! Great write

Hazzah! Boom! Great write


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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ThankSSS

Lol

allets's picture

NO PM, No Forwarding Address

kit - keep in touch, htsys hope to see you soon ect. u r missed, - be well - slc


 

 

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

Sorry Stella!

I was stuck reading the Dune saga, a scifi series that I hadn’t read before.  That was about 6 months of my spare time!!!

darkpool's picture

Embets

Evocative, sensual. Love the use of scent via orange blossoms, I like it too.

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Thank you

I try to incorporate other senses, but it’s a struggle because I’moverwhelmingly visual.