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mirrors don't lie

my reflection in your eyes

i can never be

who you wanted me to.

how do i love thee?

let me count the ways

that i'm not good enough for you.

 

subtle little barbs

you self help guru

raise me up the playing field

grooming me to perfectly

compliment you.

a careful image composed

to stand next to you.

 

light fire under feet

so if i dance on coals

eventually

i'll fit in with all of you

even though

you yourself stay low

and step on nothing

more dangerous than drops of dew.

 

so mediocre

even amidst the mediocrity.

surprised you ever noticed me.

your actions speak truth.

what effort was i worth, to keep?

you'd rather chase dream vixens

and lose.

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allets's picture

Nice Line!

"...step on nothing/more dangerous than drops of dew..." - bravo! slc


 

 

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

thanks!!!

i honestly wasn't too sure about that line, since i had to use "drops of dew" instead of "dewdrops" to maintain the rhythm.  i was afraid it might sound too forced.  but i went with it anyway :)

KindredSpirit's picture

On the Verge

Of telling you

How much I like it.

KS

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

hahaha!!!

i'll wait in suspense then

SSmoothie's picture

And bam! There it is! Yes the

And bam! There it is! Yes the quintessential story of settling.  But sometimes that's how real love starts ) great piece loved the Shakespeare reference too. I have a similar idea in a piece  or few hundred ;) hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

just based on the sheer amount of poems

i think "a few hundred" is probably right!!!! 

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

aww thanks ssmoothie!!!

i' ve noticed a lot of ur poems describe relationship problems similar to mine.... unfortunately lol!!!  like ur title (sorry if i eff it up) "the downside of accommodating and sacrifice" that's a mouthful of truth right there.