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Kracked Haiku
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The time spoke
in electric dreams
of quilted squares.
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Beyond and below
you the street roars
white sirens echo
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Ripe apples fall
the bruised suns frown
some earth weeps floods
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A blue earth tilts
vanishing stars
grow up side up
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Hawaiian breeze
introduces real wood
fingers flung farther
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A fly crawls six floors
wings unclipped
sharing universes
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Book observes glasses
purloined pain visits
the black leaves dance
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Lady A
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You fluidly sowed our
You fluidly sowed our existential planetary existence together. : )
I Patch It
As I Can - Wallace Stevens
Now these are some mighty
Now these are some mighty fine haiku. Although I do not normally care for those that break the 5/7/5 count, these are certainly an excellent exception to that preference . . . especially the haiku about the blue earth's tilt: that one is stunningly, and exquisitely, perfect.
Starward
Fractured Haiku
Is a site G. schaefer posts on aka anerican haiku (pronounced Hike!)- maybe I should submit them. Too tired. Novelled 1p-530p today. Glad u liked the tilted earth.
~A~
Yes, I really liked them.
Yes, I really liked them. And I hope you will post them not only here but elsewhere, as they need to be read by many others . . . especially that tilted earth haiku. Wow!
Starward
No Longer publish
Addictive as pp site. Gotta novel. I put it on message board.
Lady A