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The Living Fallen Star
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The Living Fallen Star
The fallen Star left it's heavenly trail.
As it descended to earth and fell at my feet.
Upon this sandy shore and at my sandeled feet; the fallen star had lost it's sparkle.
Transformed into a sea creature, delicatedly designed and marked; but a star it remained.
Patiently the star awaited the glisteninng lunar tide.
Impatiently I plucked the sandy star from above the shoreline and walked with it to the illuminated waves.
Releasing the star to a watery habitat and at my immersed feet; I saw the crest fallen,
sandy star return to life.
Readily, the streaming star moved and glistened amongst the seabed's scene.
by Anita Griffiths
Beautifully
Composed poetic story!
I love it! Being Scot, we do love a great tale...and You
Being from Wales know to be a story teller.
After all it's in the blood
( Keep at your art classes too. Writing and art are superb choices to enjoy!)
I enjoyed this piece very much!
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
Wow! This is exquisitely
Wow! This is exquisitely beautiful.
Starward
The Fallen Star
Thanks starward your comment is much appreciated.
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The Fallen Star
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem I appreciate your constructive comment on my work at this poem , tri&d.
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Beautiful !!!
Beautiful !!! Thank you for the colourful stars.I got lost.
©bishu
The Fallen Star
Thank you for reading and leaving your positive comment bishu much appreciated.
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The Magic Of Stars
The transformation was marvelous to experience. You could hear the sound of waves in this poem. I thought of starfish attached, like everything else, to the universe. Lovely writing -allets-
Fallen Star
Stars are magic their appearence and disapperaence. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work, it was a pleasure to write and your comment is very much appreciated allets. Thanks.
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