The Living Fallen Star

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The Living Fallen Star


The fallen Star left it's heavenly trail.

As it descended to earth and fell at my feet.

Upon this sandy shore and at my sandeled feet; the fallen star had lost it's sparkle.

Transformed into a sea creature, delicatedly designed and marked; but a star it remained.

Patiently the star awaited the glisteninng lunar tide.

Impatiently I plucked the sandy star from above the shoreline and walked with it to the illuminated waves.

Releasing the star to a watery habitat and at my immersed feet; I saw the crest fallen,

sandy star return to life.

Readily, the streaming star moved and glistened amongst the seabed's scene.


by Anita Griffiths


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Sassylass's picture

Beautifully

Composed poetic story!

I love it! Being Scot, we do love a great tale...and You

Being from Wales know to be a story teller.

After all it's in the blood 

( Keep at your art classes too. Writing and art are superb choices to enjoy!)

I enjoyed this piece very much!

Koko


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

Starward's picture

Wow!  This is exquisitely

Wow!  This is exquisitely beautiful.


Starward

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The Fallen Star

Thanks starward your comment is much appreciated.


 

 

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The Fallen Star

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem I appreciate your constructive comment on my work at this poem , tri&d.


 

 

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bishu's picture

Beautiful !!!

Beautiful !!! Thank you for the colourful stars.I got lost.


©bishu 

 

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The Fallen Star

Thank you for reading and leaving your positive comment bishu much appreciated.


 

 

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allets's picture

The Magic Of Stars

The transformation was marvelous to experience. You could hear the sound of waves in this poem. I thought of starfish attached, like everything else, to the universe. Lovely writing -allets-

 


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Fallen Star

 

 

Stars are magic their appearence and disapperaence. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work, it was a pleasure to write and your comment is very much appreciated allets. Thanks. 


 

 

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