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as they whisper
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whole lotta other stuff
awaiting love
it is dark in there
elusive, forever seeking
poetic verse
it is where
fate swirls out of the mist
uncertain distraction
a chilly wind in reverse
time after time
shroud like wisps
slowly devour
reality where tears rehearse
language in translation
white lies turn black as they whisper
words turn back and falsely hint
at truthfulness in their curse
How to say I love you.
How to say I love you. With your poetic capabilities and creativity the one you love is bound to capitulate. An enjyoable read and well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
A nice one Respected 9inety
A nice one Respected 9inety.And hearty commends for your 900.
©bishu
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i like this poem alot.
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Peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot
...reality where tears rehearse...
Each line builds and builds and then crecendoes into bliss. Loved this one I wondrously drifted away ~Lady A