Oh wow thankyoi cryptic bard: Oh wow thankyoi cryptic bard I read your stuff often and I.am so glad you appreciated this poem! Such an honour. Blessinhs ss
Your fascinating: Your fascinating introspection tunneled deep into a meditative, detached, nonjudgmental state I know well, and actually find refreshing, when it decides to shows up.
You described the anomalous state, the dichotomy, the disconcerting yet comfortable limbo where we stop fighting and struggling and we discover that polarity is not a choice between good or bad, joy or sorrow, light or darkness, but an observation that everything . . . just is, that opposites are, perhaps, just two sides of the same coin.
In this place you describe with pristine and graspable wisdom we can reboot, breathe and find cherished clarity. But you didn't just describe it, you brought us there. That's no small accomplishment!
Enjoyed the mind-stretching journey. Well done!
Quite beguiling poem: Quite beguiling poem encapsulating a unique emotional state that is both calming and unsettling. The juxtaposition of being unhurried yet moving swiftly, and feeling alone yet not lonely, creates a sense of balance and introspection. The curiosity and marvel at this peculiar experience are conveyed with clarity, making it's reader ponder the nature of such feelings. The imagery and reflections in your poem evoke a profound sense of self-awareness and acceptance of this enigmatic state. Thank you for sharing this intriguing and thought-provoking piece.
Such a powerful exploration: Such a powerful exploration of despair and redemption. It's vivid imagery and emotional depth convey the struggle of feeling lost and discarded, while also highlighting the search for salvation. The shift towards spiritual solace and the act of surrendering burdens is beautifully portrayed, offering a sense of hope and healing! What a lift!
What a hkpeful thing to be: What a hkpeful thing to be loved and looked after in a guilded cage
..smoking in a can... I've had this vision before but could never put it pen to paper you have an knack for making mundane fascinating and everyday thoughts mind boggling. I really enjoy your spouts of what ever tea you're drinking... stay awesome like that.
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