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J-Called commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Lord Jesus, Your Love by S74rw4rd-13d 20 weeks 2 days ago
Who am I, as is asked in: Who am I, as is asked in Scriptures, that you would share the grandeur of your poetry with such a screw-up as me?  Your comment has overwhelmed me with its beauty.  I do not have sufficient words to adequately express my gratitude.
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redbrick commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Lord Jesus, Your Love by S74rw4rd-13d 20 weeks 2 days ago
  If your song is of Love:   If your song is of Love eternal, mine is of love in the fleeting hour. Where you see redemption in the stars, I see it in the hands that reach across a table, in the quiet courage of forgiveness, in the fragile mercy of today.   Your faith lifts you beyond the air, mine roots me in the soil— yet both speak of sufficiency, both whisper that love, whether divine or human, is more than enough.        
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Pursia commented on: Phoenix Salute by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
The last stanza, oughf, love: The last stanza, oughf, love it.
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Pursia commented on: Rock & Roll by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
Ugh!! Ok that's enough it's: Ugh!! Ok that's enough it's all just so grand!!
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Pursia commented on: Rise by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
a dazzling display of imagery: a dazzling display of imagery and knotted thoughts twisting through my mind like a lullaby!
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Pursia commented on: Ruin by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
I can see this one presented: I can see this one presented in videotape, the way you say 'watercolor fade' beautiful word by the way, fade, say it slowly 'faaade' makes me smile inside
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Pursia commented on: Tide by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
eloquently encapsulated, clap: eloquently encapsulated, clap clap clap, lol
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Teytonon commented on: Ears Still Ringing by tallsquirrelgirl 20 weeks 3 days ago
I recently had a..: I recently had a problem with ringing in my ears as well. I solved it by setting my ears to 'vibrate'. Try it, it may work for you too.
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Teytonon commented on: PEN OF PASSION by wisdomscry 20 weeks 3 days ago
wisdomscry Gail Clarke..: wisdomscry Gail Clarke = C y I'm a gas..killer words, c?  
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alex73 commented on: Unsure by alex73 20 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you : Imagine how much less stress we would have if we could always be ourselves
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redbrick commented on: lights turned inward by redbrick 20 weeks 3 days ago
You got it! : You got it! 
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redbrick commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Gerund Endings by S74rw4rd-13d 20 weeks 3 days ago
Just glad you picked up on: Just glad you picked up on that. I aimed for it to sound like it came out of Liturgy. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: + 1ST ORTHODOX POEMS: θυσίαν αἴνεσις Gerund Endings by S74rw4rd-13d 20 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for that; thank: Thank you for that; thank you very much!   I apologize for my delay in reply.  For reasons I am too old to learn, my G-Mail is not delivering my norifications right:  some get left out.  No disrespect intended and no lack of gratitude implied.  Your poem reads like it comes out of a Liturgy, and that is a reflection of your soul.
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Pursia commented on: lights turned inward by redbrick 20 weeks 4 days ago
Like wild fire, we pillage: Like wild fire, we pillage the treasure, a thunderous plunder
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Pursia commented on: rabbits ribbit ribbons by Pungus 20 weeks 4 days ago
You are the 'My Majesty' at: You are the 'My Majesty' at the end, hands down, bound whore bowed over in silk Nunskirt of worship lol
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