I'm deeply moved by your: I'm deeply moved by your brave, authentic and shattering walk through the dark night that falls upon many of us. I felt it profoundly in every line, but the title suggests there is path, only temporarily hidden, to freedom. A lucid and devastating outpouring.
A sublimely simple, eternal: A sublimely simple, eternal cure for inner thirst, for what our true self longs for. With elegance and grace, you set our feet upon higher ground. A sparkling gem.
Praying you will get through..: Praying you will get through this ordeal and return to educating and enlightening us with your poetry. Keep the faith, my friend.
Thank you for thoe prayers. : Thank you for thoe prayers. I amsorry for the typp that I mised---I meant to say loss of mobile ablitity not love. I apologie for the brevity of this reply. I asas weak as a newborn kitten.
A striking, chilling and: A striking, chilling and achingly precise description of how the past seems to relentlessly stalk us. Very impressive, high-impact word crafting.
Please don't worry about: Please don't worry about responding to any of my comments. Just rest and focus on getting better. My deep concern and heartfelt prayers continue to go out to you. God bless you, valued friend and fine Poet.
Even though you toil..: Even though you toil
Yes, for little pay
Let other people scoff
Let them have their say
They mock you as you toil?
Let them mock, I say
To mock those who used to toil
Continue to the present day
I used to mock them myself
But I found a better way
Let them stop using the toil
Let them be full of crap all day