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sordid . . . 

    memories

derived from ashes

         cling to my mind

      too long replayed

   eight tracks on a loop . . .

forever 


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last updated 22 March 2024 - 8:39am
©21 March 2024 - 9:14pm — Mylo
22 March 2024 - 4:36am — patriciajj
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A striking, chilling and

A striking, chilling and achingly precise description of how the past seems to relentlessly stalk us. Very impressive, high-impact word crafting. 

22 March 2024 - 8:25am — Mylo
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Thank you for your kind critique.

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