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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The One by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 4 days ago
...a lamb, blood drenched,: ...a lamb, blood drenched, slain -resurrected over a lion, rampant, almighty... one deserved to break the Seals the other a metaphor of righteous zeal, two sides of the one coin.
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Seb, At Dusk, On A Summer Evening by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 4 days ago
I am so overwhelmed with: I am so overwhelmed with gratitude right now, gratitude not just on the horizontal plane of internet communication, but also on the vertical plane of twenty plus years on this site. I have never had a comment quite so superlative, and after reading yours, I feel that I have reached the point of which I first dreamed starting Monday, October 13th, 1975, when, as a senior in high school, I set aside my science fiction ambitions and turned to Poetry.  In June, I will have three procedures done; and, because of my other health issues, they have to be performed withi the hospital itself.  The outcomes may not be good.  The immediate outcomes could be dangerous to me.  This comment not only validates the poem, but strengthens me, as akin to a prayer, for June's difficulties.
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uninvited_1 commented on: So Far Away by uninvited_1 42 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your encouraging words.
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uninvited_1 commented on: Burn the World by uninvited_1 42 weeks 4 days ago
Your feedback truly means a: Your feedback truly means a lot. It is always very encouraging to see comments like this, and reminds me this is one of the reasons I write lyrics. Thank you for reading my work. 
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redbrick commented on: Burn the World by uninvited_1 42 weeks 4 days ago
These words are powerful.: These words are powerful. They don’t just express pain—they give it shape, meaning, voice. It takes courage to put raw emotions into poetry like this, to take that weight and craft it into something that speaks brings life and feeling outside of ourselves and into other's.
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redbrick commented on: BRAND NEW DAY by georgeschaefer 42 weeks 4 days ago
Most welcome George: Most welcome George
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redbrick commented on: So Far Away by uninvited_1 42 weeks 4 days ago
Grief is heavy, but you: Grief is heavy, but you remind us that love doesn’t fade—it lingers in memories, in moments, in the quiet spaces we carry forward. The way you balance sorrow with hope is powerful; it gives weight to loss but refuses to let it diminish the connection that remains.
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Seb, At Dusk, On A Summer Evening by S74rw4rd-13d 42 weeks 4 days ago
Reading this, I feel richer: Reading this, I feel richer for breathing the air of a celestial realm where words transcend the terrestrial, and I feel poorer for having been away for too long and nearly missing your crowning achievement: a culmination of everything this series represents.    This supreme homage to beauty is a mind blowing saga: from its astronomical source and its profound sixteen thousand year journey to its embodiment in an Earth angel, blithely aloof to convention and rocking those baggy pants and whimsical socks.    Your poetic craftsmanship and intricate stitching of vast, cosmic concepts with endearing, resonant humanness becomes a superpower in this incredible work.    I’m deeply sorry that I’m so insanely busy that I’ve been neglecting your precious creations. But I’ll try to pop in when I can and indulge in true art and true soul work when I can.    Brightest blessings. 
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georgeschaefer commented on: BRAND NEW DAY by georgeschaefer 42 weeks 4 days ago
thank you for reading and: thank you for reading and commenting
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redbrick commented on: Sweet Land of Teddy Bears by Spinoza 42 weeks 4 days ago
If dreams could sew a world: If dreams could sew a world of laughter, stitched in soft and golden thread, where paws clasp and hearts hum free, I’d rest there, wrapped in joy instead. No tax on smiles, no hoarded light— just open arms and simple truth: "Lub your brudder, lub your friend," where kindness reigns and love is proof.
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S74rw4rd123d commented on: Heirophant by Tetra_nova 42 weeks 4 days ago
I cannot quite explain why,: I cannot quite explain why, but this poem impressed me in ways I cannot describe.
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redbrick commented on: EVERYBODY HAS A STORY by joy 42 weeks 5 days ago
Inspiring and humanising.: Inspiring and humanising. Sometimes we live so fast we forget who we are and who others could be to us.
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redbrick commented on: BRAND NEW DAY by georgeschaefer 42 weeks 5 days ago
Such is the anticipation! A: Such is the anticipation! A veritable srping of versification
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redbrick commented on: Duck by Teytonon 42 weeks 5 days ago
LOL... : LOL... 
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Teytonon commented on: Duck by Teytonon 42 weeks 5 days ago
Yes, that’s the drake..: Yes, that's the drake, though I don't know if he's still there since this was done six years ago. It does bring to mind a joke, however. A woman walks into a bar carrying a duck A drunk at the bar 'Hey, where'd you get the pig?' 'It's not a pig, it's a duck' 'I was talking to the duck' Thank you for your comment!
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