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cynosure commented on: From Scientist to Sonnet Sleuth: Why I Left Academia to Reclaim My Love for Literature by cynosure 35 weeks 2 days ago
Overwhelmed: Dear redbrick,   I admit I saw the notification when I went to bed last night. Your words honestly moved me more than I can say, in the best way. However, as you can probably appreciate, it is not without uneasiness and feeling unworthy.     I had to read your response multiple times, needing some time to absorb it and appreciate your kindness and understanding. Your reflection feels like a gentle yet powerful acknowledgment of my journey, and I am genuinely touched by the compassion and empathy you shared. It’s rare to find someone who not only understands the challenges I’ve faced but also has a deep understanding of what it has taken to move on and change the narrative.     So again I would thank you for such a heartfelt message — it made me pause, feel comforted, and gave me a renewed sense of purpose and responsibility. I genuinely appreciate your support and look forward to sharing more as I continue. I have posted a further reread of Eliot’s Love Song in case you missed it.    With gratitude cynosure (David W) 
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redbrick commented on: to be draped across the sky by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
  Thanks Starward-Led, for:   Thanks Starward-Led, for laying that out and inspiring some more thought through R136a1. And I hope no more shops close up as poetry comes in alll shapes and sizes. 
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redbrick commented on: a silent witness by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks for that encouraging: Thanks for that encouraging thought. Pity the internet wasn7t the way it was back then as it is now. I can only hope that we can and have and continue to support those in need in our active days.
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redbrick commented on: June 14, 2010: journal entry by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Good to hear, thanks: Good to hear, thanks
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redbrick commented on: ear to Endymion by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Endymion sold his moonlit: Endymion sold his moonlit silence to a symposium of galloping academics who mistook the meadow for tenure.  
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redbrick commented on: Hölderlin by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
...be low and rooted, words: ...be low and rooted, words blooming, breaking ground.
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redbrick commented on: a dance between skies by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Well now that's a dark alley: Well now that's a dark alley worth sidling into! "edgy spirits crouched in shadow... and such
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uninvited_1 commented on: My Country Has A Hitler by LittleLennonGurl 35 weeks 2 days ago
Nicely penned work here.: Nicely penned work here. Couldn't agree with you more.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: to be draped across the sky by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
[Yes, I have changed it: I have been reading Poetry since 1973, and I have especially loved poems with astronomical imagery.  But . . . but . . . I have rarely, in that time. ever found an "astronomical" poem as perfectly realized as this.  Each line, each word in each line, positively radiates and resonates a Cosmic power that even R136a1 must envy and covet.  This is a poem to bookmark on my laptop.  If I wanted to show a novice poet the kind of enormous verbal power a poem can deploy, this would be the supremest and only example needed. I am reminded of Ezra Pound's words when T. S, Eliot published The Waste Land in 1922:  "About enough to make the rest of us close up shop."
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redbrick commented on: From Scientist to Sonnet Sleuth: Why I Left Academia to Reclaim My Love for Literature by cynosure 35 weeks 3 days ago
What a moving and courageous: What a moving and courageous piece. This reads like the unfolding of a soul reclaiming its voice after being silenced, stifled, and sidelined for far too long. The narrative arc; from trauma and exclusion to triumph, purpose, and reinvention, is deeply affecting. Your journey is profoundly inspiring and a quiet triumph over trauma, misjudgment, and invisibility. The decision to return to study, not just as necessity but as a reclaiming of self-worth, is courageous. You didn’t just rebuild—you rewrote the narrative entirely. What strikes me most is your purpose: to become the guide you never had. You chose to break a cycle of exclusion by opening doors for others. That kind of empathy-led ambition is powerful. Your path through academia as a mature-aged, disabled student couldn’t have been easy. And yet, you excelled. You challenged expectations, first others’, then your own. That someone could steal your early work after all this, is devastating. But your response, to create more, share more, and still teach speaks of your character and integrity. The literary world gains something rare in your return: experience shaped by persistence, a voice sharpened by adversity, and a mission driven by compassion. I can’t wait to see the poetry and insight you share next. They won’t just inform—they’ll continue to inspire.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 2 by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
Again, you bless me with your: Again, you bless me with your very shrewd, and very accurate, interpretation of this poem.  Thank you so very much.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 2 by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you, Sir.  Coming from: Thank you, Sir.  Coming from you, that is a great compliment, and I deeply appreciate it.
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Stephen commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 2 by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
Well stated truth.: .
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 1; Question For Certain Kind Of 'Patriot,' And His Answer by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you, a thousand times: Thank you, a thousand times over, for this kind of understanding.  Your shrewd understanding, evidenced in your comment, has perfectly explicated the poem and my intention for it.  My mother and her five sibs were First Generation Americans, children of two "right off the boat" immigrants.  Her father was one of the "dirty Irish" who were treated, in the early 20th century, similarly to the way our society treats Hispanic immigrants and transients now.
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redbrick commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 2 by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
  This pieace pierces the:   This pieace pierces the patriotic veneer to reveal a haunting truth: that the spirit of independence, once wielded against empire, was also turned inward—against Indigenous lives and nations. It compels us to reckon with the deep paradox of freedom born alongside erasure. The challenge it lays down is stark but necessary: to remember not just the glory of what was gained, but the gravity of what was taken.
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