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redbrick commented on: For The Fourth Of July, 1; Question For Certain Kind Of 'Patriot,' And His Answer by S74rw4rd-13d 35 weeks 4 days ago
Here, presented is a sharp: Here, presented is a sharp and necessary question: What happens when the gatekeeper forgets the spirit of the gate? It confronts a kind of patriotism that clings to exclusion while standing beneath a monument built to welcome. Emma Lazarus, in “The New Colossus,” gave the Statue of Liberty not just a torch, but a voice—one that cried out: “Give me your tired, your poor, Your huddled masses yearning to breathe free, The wretched refuse of your teeming shore.” That voice was not a whisper of tolerance—it could be seen as a declaration of allegiance to the displaced, the desperate, the different. Lazarus, herself descended from Jewish immigrants, understood that America’s greatness was not in its walls, but in its open door.   So when the “innkeeper” in the poem speaks of keeping out the “wretched refuse,” he is not defending American values—he is betraying them. He quotes Lazarus, but forgets her meaning. He invokes the statue, but denies its soul.   To answer the poem’s question through Lazarus’ lens: True patriotism does not fear the foreign—it remembers that it once was. And it lifts its lamp, not to blind, but to guide.  
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Pungus commented on: ear to Endymion by redbrick 35 weeks 4 days ago
Emoion guided effortlessly: Emoion guided effortlessly alongside the giddy-up of roaming chariot college professors
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Pungus commented on: June 14, 2010: journal entry by redbrick 35 weeks 4 days ago
OMGOMGOMG best Jounral entry: OMGOMGOMG best Jounral entry ever!!! GOD!!!
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Pungus commented on: a dance between skies by redbrick 35 weeks 4 days ago
Sinister when interpretated: Sinister when interpretated as Aliens, or edgy spirits crouched in shadow...
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: a silent witness by redbrick 35 weeks 4 days ago
This excellent poem needs to: This excellent poem needs to be read by evey bullied kid in public or private schools.  I wish such a poem had been available during my most difficult time---February 3rd, 1969 to June 7th, 1974.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: In the Act by Opia 35 weeks 5 days ago
That first stanza carries: That first stanza carries a whole lot of wisdom!
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Pungus commented on: Hölderlin by redbrick 35 weeks 6 days ago
Thusly, Christ redeems me: Thusly, Christ redeems me, where the faggot Catholic fails to see
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redbrick commented on: orbit claimed by redbrick 35 weeks 6 days ago
"Gallery" has quite a ring to: "Gallery" has quite a ring to it and perhaps so due to the effect of Van Gogh and Co on my creative life curriculum and and journey.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: Why I write about love so much by Scandalofgrace 36 weeks 11 hours ago
An excellent statement of: An excellent statement of intention achieved and demonstrated in these poems.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: Fancy verdant garden under a starlit sky by Scandalofgrace 36 weeks 11 hours ago
This is very beautiful,: This is very beautiful, except for the word "betwixt," which violates the conversational tone.  Ought to be "between."  Otherwise, this exquisitely beautiful, especially the stanza that introduces the stars.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: orbit claimed by redbrick 36 weeks 11 hours ago
This is one of the: This is one of the centerpieces of your entire gallery of poems.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: PRIDE IN HUMANS by joy 36 weeks 11 hours ago
This is . . . has to be . . .: This is . . . has to be . . . one of the MOST BRILLIANT poems on this whole site.
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C03Rul3Sc3n7 commented on: THE BOY IN THE BLUE DENIM DRESS by joy 36 weeks 12 hours ago
Except for the line about: Except for the line about "better balance" (better implies judgement and heteronormative prejudice), this is an exceptionally important poem.  Admittedly, I do not care for most of your daily postings, but this is like a lilly in the garden, and I applaud your accomplishment.
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redbrick commented on: today’s battles by redbrick 36 weeks 2 days ago
It can be supposed that our: It can be supposed that our insanity is given some free range in the realm of poetics... licence and justice all rolled into one.  more emojis, but limited on this site.
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redbrick commented on: draft: fill this out later by redbrick 36 weeks 2 days ago
 zeese buttones ? :  zeese buttones ? 
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