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redbrick commented on: a new vision of bodies unbound by redbrick 32 weeks 1 day* ago* Your generous reading brings: Your generous reading brings the poem to life, dear S74r5p4r3d; seeing it as an event rather than mere words captures exactly what I hoped to spark. I’m thrilled that the journey from wandering to wonder resonated with you, and your thoughtful praise inspires me to keep reshaping such themes into fresh, shared experiences. [ go to comment ]
S74r5p4r3d commented on: fig leaves in the wind by redbrick 32 weeks 1 day* ago* And here is a sequel to the: And here is a sequel to the previous poem, an extended reimagining of the Genesis tale, which presents a most powerful perspective indeed. I have had a very rough day, medically, but reading these two poems as the crisis subsided was like receiving a verbal curative from one of PostPoems' finest. Reading your poems at this stage in my life is a blessing indeed. [ go to comment ]
S74r5p4r3d commented on: a new vision of bodies unbound by redbrick 32 weeks 1 day* ago* When you post a poem, you are: When you post a poem, you are not just filling a screen, but creating an event because of the quality of your verbal artistry. This particular poem, a reimagining or new interpretation of Genesis 3 approaches its subject with a new perspective but takes it place among the best of ancient iterations of the sacred subject. I especially like the way the poem moves from wandering, in line 1, to settling in a dwelling of wonder in line 20. [ go to comment ]
justshan1983 commented on: The Stories in my Head by justshan1983 32 weeks 1 day* ago* Thank you : Thank you for reading, and always remember! [ go to comment ]
Jesster commented on: The Stories in my Head by justshan1983 32 weeks 1 day* ago* Relatable to me: Thank you for sharing and reminding me [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: starlight pact by redbrick 32 weeks 3 days* ago* Am sure that a time will come: Am sure that a time will come when the words shall present themselves of their own accord. thanks as always. [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: unlikely wedded minds by redbrick 32 weeks 3 days* ago* Thank you so much. And: Thank you so much. And language is indeed powerful when we pay close attention to it and respect it. [ go to comment ]
S74r5p4r3d commented on: Ingathering by alwalclif 32 weeks 3 days* ago* I really like this poem. The: I really like this poem. The autumnal imagery is deployed in a way that is not just merely read, but is also felt---in the soul, and in the gut. As a child, I always enjoyed Autumn, and this poem remminded me of those memories. I also enjoyed the rhyme scheme, although the last stanza tossed it away, and I think you could write a better version of that last stanza. But, overall, this poem has been a great reading experience. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: Hulk Hogan RIP by Teytonon 32 weeks 4 days* ago* thank you for this tribute to: thank you for this tribute to a great man. have many fond childhood memories of him [ go to comment ]
S74r5p4r3d commented on: starlight pact by redbrick 32 weeks 6 days* ago* More beautiful than my poor: More beautiful than my poor words can describe!!! [ go to comment ]
S3ryddwr_4p_110yd commented on: unlikely wedded minds by redbrick 33 weeks 13 hours* ago* I love the process this poem: I love the process this poem describes, and the succinct but powerful way the language functions. [ go to comment ]
S3ryddwr_4p_110yd commented on: Reading Saint Paul's Greetings by S74rw4rd-13d 33 weeks 14 hours* ago* Thank you. Rae.: Thank you. Rae. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: A Gay Priest by ramonathompsont 33 weeks 23 hours* ago* thanks for the great: thanks for the great feedback! [ go to comment ]
S74r5p4r3d commented on: At Routine Duty On Friday, About Noon by S74rw4rd-13d 33 weeks 2 days* ago* Rae, I miss you very much,: Rae, I miss you very much, but I will see you in Heaven when I get there. [ go to comment ]
HappilyAlone commented on: Questioning Love by HappilyAlone 33 weeks 2 days* ago* This did not age well...: We have been divorced for almost 3 years. [ go to comment ]