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Pursia commented on: feedback reverb by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
Love the cute foreboding: Love the cute foreboding elements of horror on that end-line there: a creature, as it were, reluctantly 'trembling in the beams' or so it seems to me, at least
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: What *Really* Motivates The Homophobes by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
Thanks!  The poem was: Thanks!  The poem was inspired by bullying I experienced between 1969 and 1974, and now I think I understand their motives and their real lack of self-confidence that they concealed behind almost constant verbal abuse, punctuated by physical assault from time to time.  The epithet they constructed around me, "Fairy Jerry" had lingering effects that did not stop until dusk on July 10th, 1976, when I was led to my c.b. handle,"Starwatcher."  That, and the distortions of our factory defective c.b., which turned my pipsqueak voice into a heavy baritone, compensated me for the earlier bullying.
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ramonathompsont commented on: What *Really* Motivates The Homophobes by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
Good point you made here.  : Good point you made here.  
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: 17-words by redbrick 1 year 3 weeks ago
Excellent in both versions.: Excellent in both versions.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: even the sparks are gone by redbrick 1 year 3 weeks ago
Wow, all that verbal power in: Wow, all that verbal power in a few lines.  You show everyone who reads your poetry exactly how it is done!
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ramonathompsont commented on: GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT by joy 1 year 3 weeks ago
love this!: love this!
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Pursia commented on: Phoenix Salute by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
The last stanza, oughf, love: The last stanza, oughf, love it.
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Pursia commented on: Rock & Roll by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
Ugh!! Ok that's enough it's: Ugh!! Ok that's enough it's all just so grand!!
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Pursia commented on: Rise by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
a dazzling display of imagery: a dazzling display of imagery and knotted thoughts twisting through my mind like a lullaby!
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Pursia commented on: Ruin by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
I can see this one presented: I can see this one presented in videotape, the way you say 'watercolor fade' beautiful word by the way, fade, say it slowly 'faaade' makes me smile inside
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Pursia commented on: Tide by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
eloquently encapsulated, clap: eloquently encapsulated, clap clap clap, lol
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Teytonon commented on: Ears Still Ringing by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 3 weeks ago
I recently had a..: I recently had a problem with ringing in my ears as well. I solved it by setting my ears to 'vibrate'. Try it, it may work for you too.
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Teytonon commented on: PEN OF PASSION by wisdomscry 1 year 3 weeks ago
wisdomscry Gail Clarke..: wisdomscry Gail Clarke = C y I'm a gas..killer words, c?  
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alex73 commented on: Unsure by alex73 1 year 3 weeks ago
Thank you : Imagine how much less stress we would have if we could always be ourselves
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redbrick commented on: lights turned inward by redbrick 1 year 3 weeks ago
You got it! : You got it! 
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