Love the cute foreboding: Love the cute foreboding elements of horror on that end-line there: a creature, as it were, reluctantly 'trembling in the beams' or so it seems to me, at least
Thanks! The poem was: Thanks! The poem was inspired by bullying I experienced between 1969 and 1974, and now I think I understand their motives and their real lack of self-confidence that they concealed behind almost constant verbal abuse, punctuated by physical assault from time to time. The epithet they constructed around me, "Fairy Jerry" had lingering effects that did not stop until dusk on July 10th, 1976, when I was led to my c.b. handle,"Starwatcher." That, and the distortions of our factory defective c.b., which turned my pipsqueak voice into a heavy baritone, compensated me for the earlier bullying.
I can see this one presented: I can see this one presented in videotape, the way you say 'watercolor fade' beautiful word by the way, fade, say it slowly 'faaade' makes me smile inside
I recently had a..: I recently had a problem with ringing in my ears as well. I solved it by setting my ears to 'vibrate'. Try it, it may work for you too.