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Pungus commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 25 weeks 3 days ago
Well, you got a face though: Well, you got a face though
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Teytonon commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 25 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you very much for the compliment..: Thank you very much for the compliment. Me, performing? I don't think so. I'm more comfortable behind the scenes. Thanks again for your comment. Take care,
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redbrick commented on: life-arc by redbrick 25 weeks 3 days ago
  Reading Note — The:   Reading Note — The Loop These two pieces are not fixed in sequence.Begin in the city and ride out to the farm,or start under the wide‑skied dark and follow the tracks into bricklight.The hinge is your turning point — a platform where both airs meet.Read them forward, read them in reverse,and you’ll find the same current running through:home is not one place, but the motion between.       .    
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Pungus commented on: homestead nights by redbrick 25 weeks 3 days ago
I doubt if I can keep up: I doubt if I can keep up commenting, but you will always hold my applause!
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Pungus commented on: Who is she? by Teytonon 25 weeks 3 days ago
Bravo: You deserve your own stand up special: easy enough to write and read, I reckon; take the next step and try performing.
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redbrick commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 25 weeks 3 days ago
Ha! And if fortune tips her: Ha! And if fortune tips her hat just so, I’ll have that crimson cover tucked under my arm before the ink’s even dry... brighter than a brass band at noon and twice as hard to miss. A proper bell‑ringer, you’ll hear it clear down the block.
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Pungus commented on: at the corner by redbrick 25 weeks 3 days ago
unbiased coherence, the: unbiased coherence, the paramount goal, as blessings of poetry pass me by, sullen stripey hair, unkempt, calm and clad in cozy clothes
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redbrick commented on: the old home by redbrick 25 weeks 3 days ago
...lovely to touch, but the: ...lovely to touch, but the real river’s under our feet, and it’s already moving us forward! 
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Pungus commented on: the old home by redbrick 25 weeks 4 days ago
ouija touché: ouija touché postcard from the seine
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Pungus commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 25 weeks 4 days ago
Ulysses: Yes, and if you manage to score yourself a crimson cover (on future terms) much closer than quite tremendously a redbrick classic, a real ring-dinger!
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redbrick commented on: the old home by redbrick 25 weeks 4 days ago
Just like the Potomac in the: Just like the Potomac in the winter, we need to push toward our independence of soul and expression!
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redbrick commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 25 weeks 4 days ago
Thanks for revising my: Thanks for revising my readibg list! it'll be huge 
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redbrick commented on: between shelves by redbrick 25 weeks 5 days ago
Thanks Starward-Led. I spent: Thanks Starward-Led. I spent quite a bit of time in the school library once I realised there were more books there than in our home library. Glad that this has stirred up some hopefully good memories
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StarSpared commented on: between shelves by redbrick 25 weeks 5 days ago
This transported me back to: This transported me back to my college's library in Autumn 1976.  When a poem functions as a time machine, as this one does, that is proof of enormous verbal skill and poetic artistry.
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Savvart commented on: Managing Pain by Savvart 25 weeks 5 days ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for commenting. I feel your pain, and I hope relief is available to you 
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