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patriciajj commented on: The Brave Art of Love by Savvart 1 year 2 weeks ago
“It is the holy art of: “It is the holy art of staying soft when the air is stiff with tension, of whispering calm when the storm is not yours, but rages through the person you adore.”   That stanza is a poem in itself and so flaring with the actual experience of love, not just the pretty concept, that it seems emblazoned, instinctively, on our true self, our inner being. That is greatness.    How deftly you cut through all the fluff, the cliches, the fantasies and tropes and got right to it. You gave an impeccable, heart-clutching example of love—the rock-solid, imperfect, ultimately perfect, kind—and expressed it with indisputable clarity.    Soon every ephemeral, counterfeit kind of affection seems like fading smoke next to a connection on the soul level you described when we are “met in the stillness/ and held as if we were light”.    Sublime truth.   
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georgeschaefer commented on: SHELLS OF OUR FORMER SELVES by georgeschaefer 1 year 2 weeks ago
thank you for reading and: thank you for reading and commenting
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; A Naked Young Man, Looking At Another [Definitely, **NSFW**] by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
Part homage to Cavafy, part: Part homage to Cavafy, part celebration of Love that dances to whatever music fills its heart and part tribute to precious spirits with a talent for freedom.    The prudes can just find something else to do with their time. 
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S74rw4rd1y commented on: + 9TH POEMS: During A Panic Attack by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
I sure hope not.: I sure hope not.
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Pursia commented on: + 9TH POEMS: During A Panic Attack by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
And me, blunt-force trauma,: And me, blunt-force trauma, surely
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S74rw4rd1y commented on: + 9TH POEMS: During A Panic Attack by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
Often,  I feel the exact same: Often,  I feel the exact same way, but mine will most likely be a stopped heart.
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ramonathompsont commented on: SHELLS OF OUR FORMER SELVES by georgeschaefer 1 year 2 weeks ago
very strong and powerful iece: very strong and powerful iece here.
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Beavis commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 1 year 2 weeks ago
;-): Thank you much!
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redbrick commented on: the wedding at the harvest by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
Thanks for taking the time to: Thanks for taking the time to respond. I appreciate your engagement and share in the abundance and promise.
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redbrick commented on: even the sparks are gone by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
Thank you J-Called. Really: Thank you J-Called. Really means a lot. 
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redbrick commented on: silence of the scroll by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
  It's always good when a:   It's always good when a reading has caught the paradox. The poem points us toward silence as meaning, but it takes words to open that door. That tension where needing language to notice what lies beyond language bounces off Zen and Buddhist thought. Your reflection shows the poem did its work: it made the silence audible. What you said about needing words to hear the silence captures the paradox beautifully. That’s exactly the space I hoped the poem would open up.
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redbrick commented on: rejoicing by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
  That image of being “the:   That image of being “the body burned to heat the hearth” is definitely unsettling, but it actually gets at something real: joy isn’t free. Harvest joy always costs something like grain has to be threshed, grapes crushed, wood consumed so that bread, wine, and warmth can exist. The fire in Rejoicing isn’t about destruction but about transformation: what’s given up becomes light, heat, and song for everyone gathered. It’s a reminder that celebration is born out of offering, and that what feels spent can return as shared gladness.
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Pursia commented on: + 9TH POEMS: During A Panic Attack by Starward-Led 1 year 2 weeks ago
I'll usually sieze up and: I'll usually sieze up and submit myself to having a stroke (lol)
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Pursia commented on: the wedding at the harvest by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
Wow!! This full edition is: Wow!! This full edition is incredible as tattered virgin ware stockings, ha! You really ravaged that bitch, place your bets, under the honeymoon's half-light!
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Pursia commented on: rejoicing by redbrick 1 year 2 weeks ago
I imagined myself as the body: I imagined myself as the body being burned, to heat a festive hearth. Odd.
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