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redbrick commented on: The Carrot Carriage by Pungus 24 weeks 3 days* ago* Now this appears to be a less: Now this appears to be a less than straightforward story and more a surreal horror vignette. A lone narrator sits on a porch under a howling moon, sensing death at the door as their thoughts unravel into strange, poetic fragments. Images of ash, fountains, and scorched land blur with muttered confessions, creating a mood of dread and madness. Beneath the gothic atmosphere, the piece reads like a meditation on mortality, futility, and the thin line between sanity and the supernatural; all with the ominous sound of “clickity clack” hinting that something is drawing ever closer. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: corridor of empires by redbrick 24 weeks 3 days* ago* Literally speechless.: Literally speechless. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Toward autocracy by orangejumpsuit 24 weeks 3 days* ago* Cool.: Cool. Glad to have you back. [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: How to plant garden? by Pungus 24 weeks 3 days* ago* "RADIANT BANJO" I like the: "RADIANT BANJO" I like the puddles with oil rainbows There’s always something to Tilt your head at… How strange the clouds decided to stay! We amateur astronomers are Solving a delicious riddle ‘Do not whistle when the conductor is waving at you, you reckless dreamer… now juggle…’ [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: LOVE by joy 24 weeks 3 days* ago* All I can say is Amen: All I can say is Amen [ go to comment ]
wisdomscry commented on: EMBRACE IT! by wisdomscry 24 weeks 3 days* ago* Leak, Galic? As long as I: Leak, Galic? As long as I am as powerful and potent, but without the smell. lol! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: the narrow throat by redbrick 24 weeks 4 days* ago* Decades ago, I wanted to: Decades ago, I wanted to study the Ancient History of this region. But I now realize that the footnotes, bibliographies, and debates would have sapped my enthusiasm. It took a long time to realize that; and poems like this one remind me of what I love most about that place and the various ages and cultures that have affected it. Thank you, a thousand times over for writing and posting this BRILLIANT poem!!! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: in the swelling tide by redbrick 24 weeks 4 days* ago* I may have to learn a second: I may have to learn a second language for additional resources with which to praise your amazing verbal achievements!!!! [ go to comment ]
Savvart commented on: Believe by jessie2376 24 weeks 4 days* ago* A wonderful, heartfelt poem: A wonderful, heartfelt poem you have created, expressing the depth of pain, recovery and 'moving on'. Loved it... [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: A brand new world by Teytonon 24 weeks 5 days* ago* Thank you so much for your compliment: Thank you so much for your compliment. It gets frustrating every day to read the paper about this man. I'm trying to express my frustration. I know I'm not alone. Thanks again for your comment. [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: misunderstood butterflies by redbrick 24 weeks 5 days* ago* the scrolls tilt on their: the scrolls tilt on their shelves as the ground shifts, glass trembling with the weight of heirlooms and wings; beyond the frost line, a small planet turns, its orbit tugging at the tags that rise like butterflies fleeing wrists of stone. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: misunderstood butterflies by redbrick 24 weeks 5 days* ago* Deeply tectonic, earthenware: Deeply tectonic, earthenware heirlooms, Pluto beyond empty layers of that same misunderstanding, it seems to me? [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: the archivist by redbrick 24 weeks 5 days* ago* Absolutely beautiful, there: Absolutely beautiful, there is nothing more to say. [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: the archive wing by redbrick 24 weeks 5 days* ago* could even be a metaphor for: could even be a metaphor for poets, mmm.... see you on the other side! [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: the archive wing by redbrick 24 weeks 5 days* ago* Like a time-capsule of: Like a time-capsule of combined commitment in this the everlasting, penultimate definition of jolly goodness flowing through the fountains of your forlorn courtyard... [ go to comment ]