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cynosure commented on: Torn rewrite 28Aug24 by cynosure 5 weeks 6 days ago
I thank you. : My sincerest apologies, for some reason I have not been able to gain access to this site. I had originally thought it was everyone, until I was a random SM post highlighting they had just posted.    I have had to use another computer to gain access, but I am not sure what the problem is, as I checked my IP, and there are no issues with it.   Sorry again, I got sidetracked. Thank you for your kind words. I have decided that is probably that I have come from the Paul Valéry school of thought, more popularly known due to WH Auden’s paraphrasing “A poem is never finished - only abandoned”. 
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Teytonon commented on: Can't Handle Me by LittleLennonGurl 6 weeks 2 hours ago
Your names rearranged: KAI HALACY LITTLELENNONGURL  =   'N GAL I CAN TELL YU A THINKER LOL  
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Can't Handle Me by LittleLennonGurl 6 weeks 1 day ago
LOL: LOL this is one I never write like but it popped into my head so I wrote it. Your response made me laugh thank you.
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Teytonon commented on: Can't Handle Me by LittleLennonGurl 6 weeks 1 day ago
Yo, you I can handle..: Yo, you I can handle To me you can't hold a candle I'm the man who can take you  I'll shake and I'll bake you Put you in the oven Give you some good lovin' 350 degrees  I'll do as I please..
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Madness Overtaking by LittleLennonGurl 6 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you!!: Thank you so much I'm glad you liked it. It was not a concious decision just happy accident. I'm flattered that something I wrote reminded you of it though. Good song.
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Queen_Serenity commented on: The Wolverine by Queen_Serenity 6 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you: Thank you for your kind words. It has been a while indeed but glad to be back!
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Teytonon commented on: The Wolverine by Queen_Serenity 6 weeks 1 day ago
Extremely powerful..: Extremely powerful and evocative, I really enjoyed it. Welcome back after a long hiatus.
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Ground commented on: Unintelligible by Ground 6 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much! Your: Thank you so much! Your critiques are always a blessing..
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Tetra_nova commented on: عائد by asaihati 6 weeks 4 days ago
I'm not sure how accurate: I'm not sure how accurate Google Translate is, despite that, your words are extremely moving. Thank you for sharing!
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Tetra_nova commented on: wonder by liltigg10 6 weeks 4 days ago
Well done, your work is heavy: Well done, your work is heavy and hits home hard, thanks for sharing!
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Tetra_nova commented on: Naraka-Gati by weepingwoman 6 weeks 4 days ago
Great Stuff : Your work is lovely, thank you for writing, 3D eden hit like a mac truck 
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J-C4113d commented on: Trump vs Harris Who da bomb? by Teytonon 7 weeks 1 hour ago
He lives in a realm of: He lives in a realm of unreality and wishful thinking. The name of that realm is If Only.
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J-C4113d commented on: Walk Away by Savvart 7 weeks 8 hours ago
I appreciate your gracious: I appreciate your gracious reply.  You have a real skill with the ballad stanza---something that has eluded me since I began to write poetry in 1994.
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Savvart commented on: Walk Away by Savvart 7 weeks 16 hours ago
Thank you: Thank you for the comment, constructive and to me - very useful. Much appreciated...
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J-C4113d commented on: Walk Away by Savvart 7 weeks 21 hours ago
Again, I applaud your skill: Again, I applaud your skill in deploying the ballad stanza.  However, the use of "do/does/did" with an active verb weakens it.  I bring it up because your verbal artistry is much better than that.
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