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A painters treasure
Did it hurt the fall.
from heaven, everytime it rains
I think of yu, like the first
scary movie we watched jigsaw.
Bri yu are the sea
upon, which I float
yu mean more to me
than any color I can see
If I was a painter
I wouldn’t change the color
I just make it brighter
treasures like yu are rare like
roses growing in the desert
treasures Like yu are unforgettable
you’re sweet like strawberry wine
your soul is one of a kind
God damn youre fuckin fine
I stay stoned on your love all the time.
God Damned, You're Fuckin' Fine!
Sounds like a rock lyric - such tag lines are memorable and profane but also different, simply stated, easily remembered. Nice lyrical writing, great images. "did it hurt, the fall from heaven?" (angel) and "I wouldn't change the color/I'd just make it brighter"
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It DID hurt.
It hurt a whole lot. ;P
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