Shes(incomplete)

Shes(incomplete)

She fell in love wth an empty lover who just seen the stars
Didn't know how to take her hand and be in charge
Never seen the reflection of anothers affection
She picked a fight just for some attention 
Ran away again with her heart in her hand
I come and go but never escaped our illusion of what could have
Both deeply in love without the other knowing it
Shakey on the details but given the chance it plays out word for word
Like a dream sequence but more reality where you just left hurt
Bitter sweet feeling fire tht burns in my heart is the same fire
Tht scorched the grounds of our new found earth
 
 
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any comments or suggestions?

any comments or suggestions? dont b shy....

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Good job dude!

Good job dude, especially liked the ending :)

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Thanx a lot

Thanx man...means so much. Hope to complete it soon too