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Vanguard
Their hardened hands
that shape in sweltering
embers, and fashion in strikes set ablaze
decant igneous work which cascades from her lucent crucible
like words she gilds in her impassioned cadence
as staggering and formidable
as her incisive wit
to a deluge of sparks
to a luminous immersion
I'm enthralled, pierced with affection and quickly
contemplating peculiarities
that delighted, charmed
and bewitched
beguiled and
ensnares
as she
dashes
ingots
against
anvils
and casts
her alloy fingers down my back
as if tracing the burnished contours of
her argent smile she's soldered to my memories.
I am forever fascinated by their eminence
One who solves puzzles of volcanic stardust into beauty
Great imagery in words, and
Great imagery in words, and great format around the words . . .
Starward
Awesome! Takes me back to the
Awesome! Takes me back to the days...
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
I like the structure
That's what did it
For me.
KS
It's an anvil.
It's an anvil.
I know
That is what makes it so cool
My grandfather had one
That we used often.
Mostly to clean fish on.
Walleye
I like the usages of
I like the usages of fashioning metals and working with precious stones - lapidary and metallurgy as foundation images - nice. "argent" is epecially nice. - allets -
Thanks~
Thank you again...
My friend is a metal worker and I wanted to write something about her that expressed that. ^_^
It Comes Off Nicely
and transforms into emotional alchemy. Well done, much appreciated, a breath, fresh, full...allets