Let me in. Let me out.

Who are these faces,
these dark dwellers of the mirror.
They occupy the luminescent spaces,
of which my eyes do not dare.

In retrospect of all that I am,
in pretense of what I've been.
To deny my reflection and to do what I can,
break the mirror and let me in.

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ok...... That right there, that was talent. I absolutely love the way you wright, and your style is similar to mine. Keep it up, that's good stuff.


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wow, i love it. Its really

wow, i love it.
Its really really good.
I actually dont know what else to say lol.
keep going.