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First Love
Here’s this girl I know - - she has been never loved before and every day she yearned for something more
In those days she didn’t think love existed until he walked to her through that door
It wasn’t love at first sight but she was naïve to give him a chance
Relationships always seem good in the beginning at a first glance
How long do they last is pending on they take action through the bad times to make them strong or weak for it
The questioned couple will always be tested and it’s up to them to see this
Actions speak louder than false promises especially words never speaking his actual intentions
When a person mean well in any relation, there will always be another who aim to ruin that vibe throughout the given affection
She was just a girl who was foolishly pursuing him by passion
When his idea of love was far from perfection, it leaves her to ask him this question, “Have you ever been through something without ever reaching the results of satisfaction?”
Realization melted into him when her inquiry talks about the situation at hand
It made him question himself: Was she starting to see right through him or is she too blind to understand?
He knew the answer yet he didn’t care to find out how she’ll cope without himself by her side
It was too a point where the reason behind his departure was full of lies
Never love too hard from the start if there won’t be anyone to break your fall
If a person does, it would appear to be foolish to go through it all
Loneliness from a love that wasn’t so true will leave one so cold
A person who never loved before their first time that keeps holding onto unnecessary feelings is a way to stay alone until their old
The first time someone is loved is special even if there is a majority where they’re bitterly left behind
Although, it is rare when a first love captures your heart even for eternality to find
When a love is true, let it be known for all to see
With compelling emotions, trust, communication and honesty that it’s not hard to see that it’s meant to be
Failures in providence of these things will a love so pure in the beginning with apart
Even with those with thoughts so genuine will suffer from those who break hearts
It's written very nicely. You
It's written very nicely. You write well, and I like your opinionated style, even though I do not agree, as I feel people are very confused about what love is and the sacredness it should be held in.---not exploited just because that is what society has done to it. Goes to figure why I am not a 'marriage' person. You marry the person--not their family. Being sociable and helpful to your family and friends is something very separate from how you share with each other. People can most times be very interfering and opinionated about how a loved one is being treated in a relationship, and to me it says nothing but "you are not good enough for each other". I don't think it's any different with first loves. Love is not a facade to be exploited. It is a sharing of thought, time, dreams, goals, and happiness, joys, sorrows, etc. Not a display of 'how big of a ring I have, or we both go to church together and say prayers or we have a big house, car, and good jobs. ...yet we teach through our fears of a loved one being hurt that love is something that is seen in the eyes of others and not each other.
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "