The fathers path

 

here i stand before you,my head hung low

i fought a good fight,but i hardly ever won

 

and i faltered on keeping the faith

i faltered more times than one

 

but when it was all said and done

i still call you father,do you still call

me your son

 

you forgave me from my sins 2000 tears ago

i wonder if you knew then which way i would go

and i wonder lord about the millions more

 

they must know that your right here at the door

the time is near it,s just at the door when we will be

in the promiced land for ever more

 

and the fight lord,well it will finally be done

and i can call you father and you can call me

your son,,,

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Nice poem for father's day. i

Nice poem for father's day. i enjoyed reading this.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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thanks for your comment,most

thanks for your comment,most people dont comment on religious poems

but i write whats in my heart or head whichever comes first

 

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Religious Verse

Popular, but read by shy poets.

 

Do you talk

to the Lord? she

asked.

.

I talk to god

and jesus

too.

.

We quarrel

sometimes,

then

make up.

.

~~A~~

 

 


 

 

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Re: Hey

we argue daily but we make up

sounds like real life