Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman

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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.

Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.

Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.

like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 

 
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Cascade's picture

It's like a whole nother

It's like a whole nother world on the inside. No one else knows the movies and landscapes of your private world. happy trails, dear poet

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thank you for reading,i

thank you for reading,i appreciate it !

Phoenix_Rising's picture

Beautifully written.  

Beautifully written.  


*~I may fall, but just like the Phoenix, I will rise from the ashes~*

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thank you for the visit !

thank you for the visit !

bishu's picture

Enjoyed the write

Brain..... fast moving train....


waterfall... falling from the mind   


Much much liked good friend 


©bishu 

 

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thank you much,good to see

thank you much,good to see you my friend

sweetwater's picture

I throughly enjoyed reading

I throughly enjoyed reading this poem, although having noticed Hemaidy's comment about the begining I feel only the word 'train' may be changed, it's a little out of context with the rest of the poem, a bit harsh.  But even if you kept it in it is still a great poem. Sue.

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thank you for reading sue,i

thank you for reading sue,i really havent took the time to edit it !

SSmoothie's picture

That was exceptional it's as

That was exceptional it's as if you spoke my mind! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

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thank you for dropping by !

thank you for dropping by !

allets's picture

Memories

Some so precious, some worth not revisiting, but I've been thinking about memory lately - and decided thinking more of the future and moving is better than getting lost in so much rich history. Brief visits work - nice write. - slc


 

 

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thank you for reading !

thank you for reading !

allets's picture

Ya Welcum!

Always can find something entertaining or educational and occasionally giggle worthy - yr poem pal from Michigan. Nice rose - slc


 

 

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then it is yours in every

then it is yours in every color !