Lay me down,By your side

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I want to,
lay down by your side;
feel the warmth,
from your heart.

Feel your love,feel your pain,
as it flows,
from your soul,
in to mine.

want to,
lie down,
by your side.

Hold you close,
your body next to mine,
feel your love,
till i die...



 
 

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Cascade's picture

This is beautiful...

This is beautiful...

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i am glad that you loked it.i

i am glad that you liked it.i changed the music from willie nelson to this one.

it is an honest word from a man to his love


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The timing and the layout of

The timing and the layout of the verse was just right the pace had sympatico with the beat and the emotion -'well done:) 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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thank you very much,been away

thank you very much,been away for a few days


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its a good feeling huh?  

its a good feeling huh?

 


young with alot to say 

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lol,for many years i have

lol,for many years i have shared those feelings,thank you for the visit !


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Sweet

Lovely,tender poem:)


Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....

Words

 

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thank you for the visit !

thank you for the visit !


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That was Lovely !!!!!!!!!

Wow


©bishu 

 

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thank you mr bishu,hope you had a great thanksgiving


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Heaer Glowing Write

This is what love poems should do to the reader, warm and nuzzly - Liked one whole lot!


 

 

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thank you for reading !


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