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Vixen
I caught a movie with vixen
She caught a movie with me
I wanted romance, she wanted drama
We ended with a comedy
I had feelings for vixen
She never really had feelings for me
I hid mine beneath my skin
She shared her’s freely
I went to the seaside with vixen
We had ice cream and danced on the beach
As we threw ourselves off the edge of the pier
She told me not to fall too deep
I started counting on vixen
She even started counting on me
I can't recall how many days it lasted
we lost count eventually
I shared a cigarette with vixen
She shared a cigarette with me
I kicked the habit every couple of months
She never stopped kicking me
I had a fall out with vixen
Well I guess she had a fall out with me
I was right, she was wrong
i lost more than the price of a movie
Although some of the rhymes
Although some of the rhymes feel forced, the overall poem is quite a reading experience.
Starward
Thanks, this was one I had a
Thanks, this was one I had a little
fun with, I acknowledge it's not my best
My mother was a rainbow
My father turned her grey
they loved me like a sky lantern
they watched me fly away
Not at all, I was just
Not at all, I was just excusing my poor writing lol
My mother was a rainbow
My father turned her grey
they loved me like a sky lantern
they watched me fly away
Now I am ashamed of myself
Now I am ashamed of myself for commenting in that way. Please forgive me.
Starward
You Were Right?
& all u lost was movie fare - ah, so much remembered - slc
Years have passed, this is a
Years have passed, this is a distant memory, i am now married to my beautiful wife, I feel i have won so much more
My mother was a rainbow
My father turned her grey
they loved me like a sky lantern
they watched me fly away