Picture

Let me push this pencil slightly

To draw her picture for you lightly

Let you fill her empty spaces

Give her hopefull happy faces

Let her kiss me, let me hold her

Do not bend distort or fold her



Lay me down and let me keep

Her wrapped within my arms to sleep

Can you give her memories

Fill her with dreams and fantasies

Make her want me to be near

Let me take away her fear



The nervous feelings fall away

Her every action makes me stay

Let her now realease the strain

Let go of her forgotten pain

Wipe her crimson tears aside

Let her come to me to hide



Walk into my web of fire

Show her my passionate desire

Give her soft and supple lips

Place my hands upon her hips

Tell her goodbye but never leave

Feel her hands crawl up my sleave



Night lit curtains softly blow

Moonshine makes her figure glow

Whisper softly in her ear

Words you make her want to hear

When I caress her make her quake

Drive her crazy; no mistake



Daylight burns the misty air

As I fiddle with her hair

Let her look into my soul

Let her vacant heart be full

Let every word and every stir

Manifest my love for her



Lying here alone with me

Her picture's all of her I'll see

You and her are just a dream

A river where there was a stream

This happiness you can't allow

But let me hold her, just for now.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I just wrote this 2-2-2004.  I hope you like it.

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Kathleen Kelly's picture

i think this one is favorite. i keep coming back to it and rereading it. it really does paint a picture. it's beautiful.

Nicole Mcwhorter's picture

OH WOW!!! that was really really great, u write real good poems. i read ur bio, ur pretty interesting, lol. but n e wayz this poem the best ive read yet. keep writing!!!!

Hazel Jane Baird's picture

First, let me say that I adore this poem. I've been sitting reading it over. It's beautiful!
Second of all, I am incredibly impressed with your profile and what you had to say about all poetry being good and having a meaning. It's just so true!

Thank you for the comments you left about my work!
I'd like it if you kept in touch :)

Hazel

Michelle Voegtle's picture

I love this .. it has a lot of meaning to it and it reminds me a lot of somethin i went threw. I can relate to this in a lot of wayz that i never thought n-e-one could put into words. congrats on this. i think its amazing. you have a real talent..

Heather Bob's picture

Oh wow I love this. It's everything I've ever wanted someone to say to me! lol...great

Caitlin's picture

It's lovely, but I don't know what to think of it...Who's it for?