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Second Chance
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Hopeful/love/caring Another start
A beating heart
A chance to rise above the flames
A fueling spark
Erase the dark
Beginning to bury the shame
-I will not fail, no not this time
I can exhale and breathe a sigh
Because this is my time to shine
This is my second chance at life- (chorus)
Breaking new ground
Finally sound
Spread my wings and take to the sky
Can't hold me down
Soul has been found
Soaring like an eagle so high
-chorus-
I won't fail this time
I refuse to die
I won't fail this time
Because this is my second chance at life
-chorus-
Thanks for taking the time to
Thanks for taking the time to read my work everyone. I appreciate the comments.
Suggestions
Remove "so high - cliche and eagle as ending is srtringer, more emotion - lustener is left sailing. Remove "and" condense, enhance varied rhythm. The balance is a chart buster. Third stanza is only bridge needed. Open with it, one midway repeated. Again at end. Title: Soaring Like An Eagle. Nice.
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~S~
op ten on the charts
op ten on the charts
ron parrish