Ocean of Sorrow

Everyday I feel the pressure of the lies... Because I have no answer to life's whys.
Drifting through a troubled sea... Consisting of my many faults, it seems.
Ships sail by, and never stop to see... If I might need some help, but only laugh with glee.
Trying to reach the closest vessel... But this ocean of sorrow requires all of my strength to wrestle.
I want to reach out, to call for a savior... But I can't deviate from my constructed behavior.
And I hope for peace, but to my fate I'm resigned... Because I know in my heart...it's something I'll never find.
So I wait, and hope for a sign... From someone...anyone...benign.
Everyday I feel the pressure of the lies... Because I stopped looking for answers to life's whys.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Another poem I wrote a while ago. Feedback would be appreciated, hope you like it!

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SSmoothie's picture

Nice work!

Very good ideas and rhymes! Cheers SS


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cassyjerrett's picture

I can't believe how accurate

I can't believe how accurate that poem felt. especially when one is so down its really hard to find a way to get through it! I love it. very well written:)

Typhoan's picture

My Thanks!

Thank you for the comment, I wasn't sure if it was any good. ^.^