That's It, I'm Done!

It's the despair of despairs

Something that impairs

A carefree feeling flares

Exclaiming "Who cares!"

All hopes are like whirlpools

To the dismay of our cools

Sinking unrestrainedly rules

Becoming much like stools!

Flushed and gobbled up

Crippled, unable to stand up

These waters are just one stop

Not everyone makes it atop!

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Kris Grula's picture

the flow to this is amazing the way the words slide from my tounge as i read this ...beautiful displayed emotions