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Watch you, Watch me
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My Everything You watch me,
Dilated eyes
A hunger,
A need
I watch you,
Widened eyes
A craving,
A plea
The space surrounding
Grows to a dim
Just you and me
And this Wednesday whim
You feel me
Shameless hands
A journey
A design
I feel you
Stirring hands
A show
A crime
The space surrounding
Grows to a dim
Just you and me
And this Wednesday whim
I like your use of repetition
I like your use of repetition and sparse use of words.
Thank you, appreciate it :)
Thank you, appreciate it :)
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**
Very nice flow, still has
Very nice flow, still has that dark undertones and I really like this one! Great work
Thanks Matt :) I've realized
Thanks Matt :) I've realized that the dark undertones are literaly my unabashed feelings. There's something about writing and defining a moment in time that I love.
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**