My Mother's Hands

My mother's hands smell like spicy, gingerbread,

formed into little men, with smiling faces,

that she dances across the kitchen table.

That smell warms my tummy.

I will be full tonight.



My mother's hands smell like hot, fluffy bubble bath,

sweet and clean, foaming over the edge of the tub,

onto the clawfeet, reaching out to the floor.

That smell makes me giggle.

I will be clean tonight.



My mother's hands smell like roses,

chosen from her garden and arranged upon our armoire,

heavy with petals, and dark perfume.

That smell fills me with contentment.

I will be secure tonight.



My mother's hands smell like fresh linen,

beat stiff from strong breezes,

while clinging to the clothesline.

That smell tickles my nose.

I will be well rested tonight.



My mother's hands smell like dusty, mildewed,

photographs of children with missing teeth,

and tousled unkempt hair,

stored for eternity in the big trunk down the hall.

That smell makes me melancholy.

I will be thoughtful tonight.



My mother's hands smell like warm rainwater,

poured gently through her long auburn hair,

still adhering itself to every strand of her being.

That smell makes me aspire.

I will be ambitious tonight.



My mother's hands smell like "Evening In Paris"

still resting upon every intricate piece of jewelry she owned.

"Wait," my daughter sniffed, "Your hands smell like grandma's."

I will be lonely tonight.


Author's Notes/Comments: 

For my mother, who no longer remembers me -- so we will all remember her.

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palewingedpoetess's picture

I've never had my heart quite so beautifully broken ...........

as you did in this poem remembering your mother. I too would be devastated if indeed my mother could no longer remember me. That is a tragedy I cannot wrap even my soul around. You wrote this so beautifully. It made me feel very thankful for the living, breathing loving healthy mother I have. Thank you for that!, a tearfully sincere, Melissa Lundeen.........

Robert C Millar's picture

Nice Poem

Lauren Callon's picture

don't be lonely, you have your daughter and you obviously have your beautiful memories. this poem is so attractive to the senses. that really makes a poem stand out and grab your imagination. I feel like I have memories too like that of my mom but I could not capture them in words so well. It's hard for me to write about her b/c we are not close anymore. This was a beautiful piece, I loved reading it

Nancy H's picture

This is wonderful Geneva! I got cold chills through my body when I read the last stanza. An extremely touching poem with intense images... Nicely expressed! Thanks, Nancy

Rhonda M's picture

What a truly beautiful poem. Broughttears to my eyes and made me think of my own mother. This is a great poem!