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 we all heard about the white light when you die... your body gets lifted up throught this light, all your cares and worries go away... your filled with love, and happiness... and theres the talk of the black ness that feels empty that you don't wanna look into.... I seen that white light one time.. I was being brought out of the blackness that surrounds it.... its true how beautiful it is.. its  the most beautiful thing I have ever seen... and before I knew it she turned and walked away.. throwing me back into the darkness of my own life...

Starward's picture

That ending is a twist worthy

That ending is a twist worthy of the Twilight Zone.


Starward

 

ashes_twisted's picture

OOOoooo.

was not expecting that ending, 

bravo!


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

Leo87's picture

Thank you..glad you enjoyed

Thank you..glad you enjoyed it 

allets's picture

Great Title

May love come and stay and bring light to all who live in darkness. Thought provoking words. ~A~

 

Where U ben fo 36 weeeeksss? :D

 


 

 

Leo87's picture

I'm around  

I'm around Laughing 

allets's picture

Around Where?

I didn't see you there. Always good to have a visit. Still writing poetry? - allets -