Walking In The Rain

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I walk slowly,
I have no where
I need to go.

I close my eyes,
and lift my face,
up to the sky.

I let the raindrops
fall against my face,
against my lips,
down my body.

The rain tickles
as it trails down
my body.

Walking in the rain,
has a certain type
of appeal to it.

Others might not
like it,
but I love it!

Walking in the rain,
is freeing in a
different type of way.

Sometimes,
the rain can chill you
to the bones,
and other times
it offers relief
from the heat.

Walking in the rain,
is actually kind of beautiful!

The world sounds
like it is clouded,
and the only things
you hear,
is the rain hitting down
onto the earth.

The rain surrounds you,
and hugs you
against itself
and I welcome
the hug,
happily!

Walking in the rain,
is something that I enjoy.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Just a poem about walking in the rain.
Please let me know what you think!

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running_with_rabbits's picture

:) I also lovge walking imn

:) I also lovge walking imn the rain and I think you captured the feeling well

this bit made me wanna go in the rain soo bad I am sad that there is none

"I walk slowly,
I have no where
I need to go.

I close my eyes,
and lift my face,
up to the sky.

I let the raindrops
fall against my face,
against my lips,
down my body.

The rain tickles
as it trails down
my body."

that's my fav part of the poem


Much Love

Ashley

thisisme789's picture

=D i'm glad that u felt that

=D i'm glad that u felt that from reading this! =D


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SSmoothie's picture

I love the poem, not too

I love the poem, not too crazy bout the cold and germs part cause the start os so beautiful, it sort of ruins the beauty of it but still very lovely even so. I enjoyed this very much!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

I will go back and change

I will go back and change that!


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