Tingle, Tingle Caaa-Chew!

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I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's the same tingling I get
when I have to sneeze!
but, I am unable to get
this stubborn sneeze
out of my nose!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

Maybe tickling my nose
will help me get it out!
oh, nope! That didn't
do anything at all!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

The tingling persists,
and it's getting
to be kind of annoying!
I want to be able
to sneeze, and get it out!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's like this,
tingle, tingle, tingle,
sniff, sniff, sniff.
Blow, blow, blow,
nothing results.

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's the same tingling I get
when I have to sneeze!
but, I am unable to get
this stubborn sneeze
out of my nose!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

Maybe tickling my nose
will help me get it out!
oh, nope! That didn't
do anything at all!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

The tingling persists,
and it's getting
to be kind of annoying!
I want to be able
to sneeze, and get it out!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

I have to sneeze,
the tingling in my nose
is telling me so,
but it is refusing to
come out!
Hmm...
I don't know what to do!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's the same tingling I get
when I have to sneeze!
but, I am unable to get
this stubborn sneeze
out of my nose!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

Maybe tickling my nose
will help me get it out!
oh, nope! That didn't
do anything at all!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

The tingling persists,
and it's getting
to be kind of annoying!
I want to be able
to sneeze, and get it out!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's driving me crazy,
and I can't stand it!
Make it stop,
oh please,
make it stop!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

It's the same tingling I get
when I have to sneeze!
but, I am unable to get
this stubborn sneeze
out of my nose!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

Maybe tickling my nose
will help me get it out!
oh, nope! That didn't
do anything at all!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

The tingling persists,
and it's getting
to be kind of annoying!
I want to be able
to sneeze, and get it out!

I have this tingling
inside of my nose!
This tingling keeps going,
and won't stop!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A poem about this annoying tingling in my nose, and it won't stop no matter what I do! Please let me know what you think!
The original title was "I Have To Sneeze!"

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SSmoothie's picture

awesome i think you nailed it!

thats exactlky how it feels for me :) ts, ts- tsssgnrt tis- aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh-chhooooooooooohhh !!! loved it!


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Lol, thanks honey bun! ;P I'm

Lol, thanks honey bun! ;P I'm glad that you liked it! Keep rocking!


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chris's picture

A great job! I liked it.

A great job! I liked it. When I read it, I thought of a Dr. Seuss book. You could publish it. The repetition is great as well! Children would love it.
I can relate and children could relate too. Another reason why it would work.
Thanks.

thisisme789's picture

Really?

You think so? =) thanks! I'm glad that you liked it! Your post helped me to see what you actually liked about it, instead of just a quick, "I like it". Thank you!


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