vodka with a twist

to be a part of the elements is a ture feelin for me,

to burn like fire,

to float like wind,

to be strong and solid like earth,

to flow like the sea.

the fire that burns inside of one,

burn of the skin it will be fun.

floating like the wind and softly push through your hair,

to skim over your soft skin with care.

for feelin your walk across with your bare feet like touchin my skin,strong as a rock but soft at sin.

crashin in to clifs with a kewl mist,

feelin good as hell drinkin vodka with a lemon twist.

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starlite's picture

This poem is very descriptive and has awesome imagery. It also has the surprised ending which kind of goes with the title. I like how you compare... it was very interesting!