Up an atom

Don't have much energy

All things being equal

Sittin on my um,ass

These are good times

Gotta get up to speed

Who you thinkin of

It's getting light

Got that squared

Away. I've time,space

To continue,um

Bottom line

I'm no Einstein

3/14/79 - 4/18/55

It's all relative anyway. At least,

That's my theory

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I can tell this poem is

I can tell this poem is profound, that goes without question, but I am not sure I understand all of the lines.  Would you explicate it for me?


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Thank you. I don't know about profound. What i tried was to take E=mc2 and use each component as the last word of each line. Glad you got a kick out of it. I did too.

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Now I see it.  My mind must

Now I see it.  My mind must be in a fog today.  Using Einstein's energy theory for the structure of the poem was rather clever.  Too bad he couldn't accomplish the theory of everything that he had dreamed of.


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And as far as finding any meaning, if you do you’re a better man than I am.Did I mention 3/14 is the day Stephen Hawking died?

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No, you did not, and I sure

No, you did not, and I sure did not know that.  


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This

Makes me smile


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Up and atom

Thanks! Maybe I’ll take a stab at the number of digits in pi.Might take a little longer.