Chooser of the Slain

"Imagine being born perfect"

I exclaimed, enamored

I exuded, besotted

 

Guiding many to witness

A grand

engraving
of celestials.

 

a bellow from their ramparts-

"There will be no greater masterpiece".

 

Your features exist to us as mere 

excerpts of their full astral complexity,

an infallible hand in a pond

or a sprite's wings in our world,

epitomized only as far
as we could perceive.

 

Your spellcasting eyes of tourmaline are

as rich grain fields and just as fertile with love, unthreaded.

 

 You must

have

known

this,

confidently,

&

without
demur

 

 

simply,

 intimately of course...

 

My words tremble with you.

My lips are yours to have.

My heart is yours to break.

 

proverbially of course... 

absolutely,

 

I instead worship the loam beneath you, literally,

that you seraphically skate delicately.

 

My ore of exaltation melting for you

 in a furnace of envy that I couldn't be

born as utterly perfect

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Every thunder-struck line

Every thunder-struck line spilled into the next with such impeccable, shattering eloquence I can only say: Congratulations!

 

I just witnessed greatness. For that immense pleasure, thank you!

 
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Wow ty

You're so nice to me. I've never felt as though I was any "good" persay at expressing myself but I'm glad to hear it resonates with someone as accomplished