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BROKEN HEARTS
he says she says
you never give you never listen
me space to kick to me and when does
back and relax after my day ever end and
a long day's work why don't you take me
a chance to drink out more often and
a cold beer and will you ever say
watch the you love
game me
great work
i know what
it is like
to go thru that .
I love concrete poems--ESPECIALLY when they make sense like this one. I am saving your page to my favorites. I have about 10 poets on my list of favorites and now you. I like your work.
Jessica
WOW! Great poem. Makes total sense. And the heart shape
was way cool. You are really a creative poet. Keep the
spirit, never stop. ~Britters~
"You don't get to choose who you love you're not suppose
to"
Very nice, needs a touch up on she says part. think you meant "when he does" but the forms are great. I used to do them in typing class back in high school. One of my favourite free time activities. Take care...