Depression - Haiku

Living in shadows

With every curtain drawn

Feeling kinda blue

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"Living in shadows
With every curtain drawn"
Gosh, that's exactly what depression is... living in the shadows... I wasn't a fan of the last line though... the first two lines give a certain quality to the poem and then the "feeling kinda blue" just seems sort of flippant and careless... didn't seem to fit.