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A FLOWER
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ABSTRACT POEMS The world"s like a flower either fallen or
grown the leaves cover secrets and the pedals
are shown we"re like a flower the world"s like
a rose every rose has its throns if we make a mistake
the skin gets torn the world"s like a daisy pretty
and bright we have our colors but in a way we"re just
right we"re like a flower all the throns will pass
through the world like a flower just waiting to bloom.
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i love this stream of consciencousness - the ebb and flow of the rhyme keep you moving to the next line. well done and full of imagery
Little Leprechaun
I liked this poem a lot. The lines had a rhythm all of their own and flowed very nicely. I also liked the image of the world being different kinds of flowers. This piece is very unique and beautiful. Thanks for posting!