I Can't

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Soul mates

What's the point? whats the use?
I can't handle not being your muse.
I look for meaning in your dark eyes,
I can't keep lying, myself I so realize.
I mask the dissapointment oh so well,
I can't believe that you just can't tell;
When you're the one who knew we fell?
If we were really all we could possibly be;
I can't believe you can't still feel it in me,
I see the honey melting in your gentle look -
I can't know the pieces of your heart I took
I left you in a hazy doubt by word, by needs
I could not go there, not by word or by deeds...
The rapturous torture, on my pain will ever feed,
On loves one and only pledge and this undying creed,
I can't let go of all that nearly was, we were effortless,
So close. A trick, a trace and we all lose face,
Hope, hope till nothing's left,
Barr unending grace...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Haunted by the one you must lose all in this life to gain and lose in the one to come. happy to hear what you think :)

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♥CheyMarie♥'s picture

Wow :o

OMg that was amazingly Beautiful i love that it reminds me of just every pain and sorrow the world has and you just say please end this

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SSmoothie's picture

Thanks beautiful :)

Thanks beautiful :)


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allets's picture

Astonished

more by a rhymed poem by SSmoothie than the poem's wisdom and breadth. Take a deep breath before reading, a strong heart's what you'll be needing. Nice ~Stella

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