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Green Peace.
Nestled 'neath the watching trees
whose leaves now bless with
shades of calm.
Sheltered nooks are solace found
where lies the balm of silent thought,
whispered breezes steal your cares
and birds will soften them in song.
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Although I had a little
Although I had a little trouble with lines one and four, I really enjoyed the poem and the calm tone with which it is presented. You have put a lot of quiet power in the brief space of seven lines.
Starward-Led [in Chrismation, Januarius]
Hi, thank you for taking the
Hi, thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I was interested to know what you weren't sure about in lines 1and 4.
i haven't written for a while so probably a bit rusty.